Friday, February 6, 2009

Art

Last night I looked up
And saw your face glowing.

The stars were connecting to draw you
For me.

Look up tonight.
I am drawn too.

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13 comments:

  1. dinaFebruary 6, 2009 at 6:55 AM

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2009 at 6:57 AM

    stars are amazing, aren't they?

    I once wrote a poem about stars too, and was also for sundayscribblings.


    tonight the sky is so clear
    and I can see the stars glow
    hi, stars...

    I know even when the nights are cloudy
    there you always look on me
    not being seen
    doesn't mean
    not being exist

    I know even when you hide and I can't see
    you always are there and be my company
    so I'll just wait
    never too late
    for you to blink

    like now.

    thanks for visiting my blog

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  3. SHUBHAJITFebruary 6, 2009 at 8:50 AM

    simple words with complicated interpretation. i feel sometimes like a moon..placid, self-assured, not a bit of anger reflects from its body.

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  4. floretaFebruary 6, 2009 at 11:13 AM

    stars are magical

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  5. Tammie LeeFebruary 6, 2009 at 12:43 PM

    this is lovely
    I enjoy the simplicity of your words

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  6. Kilauea PoetryFebruary 6, 2009 at 2:19 PM

    Oh my goodness...this is soo cool!
    Thanks for stopping by my site for the comment too-

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  7. Sherri B.February 6, 2009 at 5:27 PM

    So few words, but the message was very powerful. This was beautiful!

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2009 at 6:23 PM

    when we look good and stright, we can see we are all connected like the starts, dot to dot.
    used to love those...

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  9. myrtle beached whaleFebruary 7, 2009 at 10:30 AM

    simple but elegant.

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  10. gautami tripathyFebruary 7, 2009 at 12:33 PM

    Succinct!


    rough drafting of art

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  11. danniFebruary 7, 2009 at 5:55 PM

    so much depth and sentiment in so few powerful words --- i feel sometimes that i can actually see my hero's face in the stars - very comforting!!!

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  12. LilibethFebruary 7, 2009 at 9:29 PM

    so much beauty in so few words. Lovely.

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  13. Tumblewords:February 8, 2009 at 2:14 PM

    Calm and peaceful, deep and serene. Very nice...

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Thanks for your comments. I love to hear what you think and feel.