Friday, February 6, 2009

Art

Last night I looked up
And saw your face glowing.

The stars were connecting to draw you
For me.

Look up tonight.
I am drawn too.

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Sunday Scribblings

13 comments:

vimana said...
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latree said...

stars are amazing, aren't they?

I once wrote a poem about stars too, and was also for sundayscribblings.


tonight the sky is so clear
and I can see the stars glow
hi, stars...

I know even when the nights are cloudy
there you always look on me
not being seen
doesn't mean
not being exist

I know even when you hide and I can't see
you always are there and be my company
so I'll just wait
never too late
for you to blink

like now.


thanks for visiting my blog

Shubhajit said...

simple words with complicated interpretation. i feel sometimes like a moon..placid, self-assured, not a bit of anger reflects from its body.

floreta said...

stars are magical

Tammie Lee said...

this is lovely
I enjoy the simplicity of your words

Regina Marie said...

Oh my goodness...this is soo cool!
Thanks for stopping by my site for the comment too-

Fledgling Poet said...

So few words, but the message was very powerful. This was beautiful!

utopianfragments said...

when we look good and stright, we can see we are all connected like the starts, dot to dot.
used to love those...

myrtle beached whale said...

simple but elegant.

gautami tripathy said...

Succinct!


rough drafting of art

danni said...

so much depth and sentiment in so few powerful words --- i feel sometimes that i can actually see my hero's face in the stars - very comforting!!!

Lilibeth said...

so much beauty in so few words. Lovely.

Tumblewords: said...

Calm and peaceful, deep and serene. Very nice...